Talk:Battle of Cassville/GA1
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 21:45, 20 June 2022 (UTC)
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[edit]@Hog Farm: Reviewer's critique below, with article submitter's replies. Djmaschek (talk) 20:19, 23 June 2022 (UTC)
- Indicate when Bishop Polk's corps joined Johnston?
Done Confederate army section was edited so this it is more obvious when Polk's units arrived in theater.
- Link Army of Mississippi
- Done Link added.
- "marched east and crossed the Conasauga River at New Echota (or Fite's Ferry)" - is this indicating that Fite's Ferry is an alternate name or an alternate crossing site?
- Done I changed it so that it reads: Fite's Ferry (New Echota). Since I refer to Fite's Ferry later, this is less confusing. Cox says: "Fite's Ferry or Echota". There is another native American village called Echota in Tennessee, and the Georgia village is called New Echota.
Through morning, will resume tomorrow. Hog Farm Talk 04:25, 22 June 2022 (UTC)
- "Johnston conducted his retreats with skill" - recommend attribution to source
- Done Add "According to historian Albert E. Castel".
That's all from me; nice work here. Hog Farm Talk 00:15, 23 June 2022 (UTC)