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Reviewer: - Jarry1250 [Who? Discuss.] 14:53, 22 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Commencing review.

Comments:

Extra recommendations:

  • Find a map

Otherwise, looks good to me. In fact, I normally find much more to say than just the above :P Regards, - Jarry1250 [Who? Discuss.] 14:53, 22 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Thanks for taking the time to review this article. Your copyedits are very good, I just fixed some typos here and there.
  • The first image I got from a modern publication of Demetrio Franco's book. Would giving this work? As for the second image, I did not upload this so I can't say for sure where it was found. I have seen it before though but this is not something which I could source.
  • I have tried to clarify everything. For the quarter-century long war part, I made it so it was Skanderbeg's personal war.
  • I also added a map.
  • Let me know what you think!--Gaius Claudius Nero (talk) 21:11, 22 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
That would be fine as a source, yes. The other source is not vital (since the copyright status is trivially established), but if you could take a moment to try to find it anywhere that would be good.
The clarify resolutions seem perfect.
I like having a map. It might also be nice to have a slightly more zoomed out "historical context" style map, done in SVG format. Are you familiar with using a program like Inkscape? I'm happy to give you a hand by creating a blank map you could mark the borders on if you had a map to hand you could use as a source.
Nonetheless, this is clearly a good article by quite a margin. I am therefore going to pass it. Regards, - Jarry1250 [Who? Discuss.] 14:41, 24 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]