Talk:Battle of Albulena/GA1
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Reviewer: - Jarry1250 [Who? Discuss.] 14:53, 22 April 2011 (UTC)
Commencing review.
Comments:
- File:Assault_on_Turkish_encampment.jpg - needs a modern-day source; would benefit from being moved to Commons.
- File:Sueleymanname_Akinci-Beys.png - needs a modern-day source; could do with a better file description page generally.
- I have copyedited the article: not changed much, but you should check anyway. I have added in a few clarifys, too.
Extra recommendations:
- Find a map
Otherwise, looks good to me. In fact, I normally find much more to say than just the above :P Regards, - Jarry1250 [Who? Discuss.] 14:53, 22 April 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking the time to review this article. Your copyedits are very good, I just fixed some typos here and there.
- The first image I got from a modern publication of Demetrio Franco's book. Would giving this work? As for the second image, I did not upload this so I can't say for sure where it was found. I have seen it before though but this is not something which I could source.
- I have tried to clarify everything. For the quarter-century long war part, I made it so it was Skanderbeg's personal war.
- I also added a map.
- Let me know what you think!--Gaius Claudius Nero (talk) 21:11, 22 April 2011 (UTC)
- That would be fine as a source, yes. The other source is not vital (since the copyright status is trivially established), but if you could take a moment to try to find it anywhere that would be good.
- The clarify resolutions seem perfect.
- I like having a map. It might also be nice to have a slightly more zoomed out "historical context" style map, done in SVG format. Are you familiar with using a program like Inkscape? I'm happy to give you a hand by creating a blank map you could mark the borders on if you had a map to hand you could use as a source.
- Nonetheless, this is clearly a good article by quite a margin. I am therefore going to pass it. Regards, - Jarry1250 [Who? Discuss.] 14:41, 24 April 2011 (UTC)