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Assessment as C-class

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This is a really fine article and I enjoyed reading it. Unfortunately the narrative lacks citations. The only citations are in the introduction where they do not belong. B-class requires that everything below the intro paragraph(s) is cited. Generally the citations appear at the end of a paragraph. If a paragraph includes two different sources, then each group of sentences should be cited separately. Djmaschek (talk) 01:23, 25 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

A quick comment as the initial author of the article. My text is basically a paraphrase of the official report and Nock's account of the accident; it only has those two sources, and there isn't anything in Nock that's not in the official report. We could add a reference to the official report for every paragraph if that would improve matters, although it wouldn't provide any more information than is already here. Tevildo (talk) 20:27, 31 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]