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Reads Like A Campaign Ad

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Hello! I'm a frequent reader of Wikipedia and was a little surprised by how this page reads. It kinds of seems like an ad for Barbara Bry, which I don't think is supposed to be the point of Wikipedia, am I right in thinking that? Is there any way to mark this page for potential bias, and to remove bizarre language. E.g. the entire "Later Life and Career" section reads in a very fishy way. There are a number of places where her intention is assumed which seems odd. (Also, should we be citing her campaign website? New Wikipedian, so actually unsure what is appropriate here.) 2600:8801:C000:4C3:31FB:5AD9:2B7D:F989 (talk) 17:27, 1 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! The phrasing and verbage of this article suggests a close and biased connection to the subject by the author. Article contains promotional, rather than neutral, language. Where information cannot be backed up by sources and appears "bizarre," as you mentioned, remove such information. Wikipedia is meant to be strictly informative and factual, and is not the place for disputed information to be characterized in one light or another. jj956004492 (talk) 04:22, 4 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]