Talk:Bani Na'im/GA1

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Reviewer: Grandiose (talk · contribs) 20:01, 21 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be conducting a full review shortly, but it looks promising. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 20:01, 21 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Please have a look at the reference text and provide, at a minimum, an access date ("Full date when item was accessed") for web links, and correct any typographical errors (for example, incorrectly spaced brackets and other punctuation problems. Coverage and source usage are all fine, as is the copy quality of the main text. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 14:08, 24 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I added all the access dates for web links, formatted the refs with citation templates and fixed the grammatical errors that I could spot. --Al Ameer son (talk) 17:37, 24 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Two things: firstly, #1 has a typographical error. Secondly, I'm afraid that #16 will have to be replaced. Whilst Palestine Remembered may be suitable for the population, the pro-Palestine bias means that it is unsuitable for "Eyewitnesses claim al-Husayni himself was wounded and was evacuated to the government hospital in Hebron. In January 1939, British forces bombed a number of neighborhoods in the town for allegedly housing al-Husayni's fighters." Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 17:58, 24 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed. I'll try to find another source backing the 1939 bombing and al-Husayni's hospitalization, but for now I'll remove the info. It isn't critical since the Arab revolt in Bani Na'im is still covered. --Al Ameer son (talk) 21:05, 24 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]