Talk:Banded houndshark/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ucucha 01:09, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Does Hemigaleus pingi merit a mention in the text?

It's not commented upon in the sources I have.

The IUCN references Compagno (1979, 1984), but does not give the full references; do you have those papers? Ucucha 09:28, 17 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Compagno (1984) doesn't comment on it except to give the synonymy. Compagno (1979) is a thesis and thus I don't have access.

"Southern Russia" to me suggests the Caucasus region; perhaps it would be clearer to say "the southern part of the Russian Far East" or something like that.

Changed to "southern Russian Far East"

Has it also been bred in captivity?

Yes; info added.

Otherwise, looking good, and the concerns above are all quite minor. Ucucha 01:09, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Also, the links to conger eel and eelgrass lead to dab pages and the link to http://ci.nii.ac.jp/naid/40016230011/%7D%7D is dead. Ucucha 01:11, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed.

Let me know of further issues. -- Yzx (talk) 01:57, 15 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, and sorry for the delay. As the issue with the synonymy does not affect the GA criteria, I'll pass the article now. Ucucha 09:28, 17 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. -- Yzx (talk) 17:21, 17 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]