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I feel so bad for Hannah

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I just, I feel so bad for her. It’s hard not to, especially when I’ve read up about her life and what her husband did 2A00:23EE:2010:743:7414:3DA3:3427:F4ED (talk) 06:42, 31 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Edits to Lead

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11/15: I edited the lead of this story for clarity and relevancy. I removed quotes from the NYT article and rephrased it to clarify that Hannah Neeleman is the focus of the article, rather than her farm. I also removed the mention of the tradwife aesthetic, as I think this is more relevant to the "Social Media" section. Cookhailey (talk) 08:38, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

11/15: I further edited the "Social media section to exclude controversies and mention of pageantry. Controversies should be its own section, and the mention of pageantry falls under the "Pageantry" section. Also, I made sure Neeleman was referred to by her last name and updated social media stats. Cookhailey (talk) 09:25, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Cookhailey, I've restored the paragraph that discusses criticisms of Ballerina Farm. Controversies should not be their own section; the essay WP:CRITS discusses this. And no good reason was given for complete removal of that content. Schazjmd (talk) 14:40, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for bringing this to my attention. Cookhailey (talk) 15:15, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Edits to "Farm and business operations": Patch plagiarism and Tone

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For "Farm and business operations": Added more information, fixed tonal inconsistencies (i.e. switching between "Neeleman," "Ms. Neeleman," and "Hannah"), and rephrased to edit out instances of patch plagiarism. I want to note that I am seeing repeated instances of patch plagiarism. Let's try to avoid this. Also, It is pretty standard (and generally considered respectful) to refer to a subject by their last name after having used their full name. Cookhailey (talk) 17:54, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]