Talk:Bali Nine/to do
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- Rewrite lead in order to summarise the lead up to the arrests, arrests and summary of sentences. No unnecessary details.
- Add references to the Summary of sentences table, and update.
- Reference all quotes in the article.
- Research and track down sources to reference pre-arrest details as this is an area not covered by that many news articles. Some of The Age's specials go deeper into detail about pre-arrest.
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