Talk:Balathal
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[edit]I love the work on Balathal. I want to know more about the people of the site. Who were they? What did they do for a living? Did they abandon the site at all? Great article! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Blong31 (talk • contribs) 12:53, 22 March 2018 (UTC)
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[edit]I liked the sections that you broke up my timeline. I think the only thing that needs work is a little editing.
There is an unneeded comma here: "a reasonable distance, of Balatval," however the sentence feels very long. There many be a way to split it into two separate sentences.
The only other suggestion I have is that you mention the agro-pastoral society, but do not say what animals were kept. That might be a cool addition.
Csmith4567s (talk) 02:49, 23 March 2018 (UTC)
I think the overall summary is very good and has good detail. You mentioned that the site was abandoned and then was rehabituated. Did any of your articles mention if new peeople came into the site, or was it the same group of people that moved away and came back? It would be interesting to know, why it was abandoned, and why either new or old people decided it was a good place to come back to and try to reuse. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ashleighfreeman96 (talk • contribs) 03:36, 27 March 2018 (UTC)