Talk:Baker family/GA1
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Nominator: Greenish Pickle! (talk · contribs) 12:33, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Pokelego999 (talk · contribs) 23:33, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
Will get to this soon
Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 23:33, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
Six GA Criteria
[edit]1. Article is well-written.
2. No OR, all info is cited in the article.
3. Broad in coverage. Covers multiple aspects of the subject.
4. Article appears neutral, and does not appear to hold a significantly negative nor positive stance on the subject.
5. Article appears stable. No notable instances of vandalism I can see.
6. Only one fair use image. Rationale appears good.
Lead
[edit]-Looks good.
Concept and creation
[edit]-Looks good.
The Baker Family
[edit]-Who is Ethan? The reporting crew seems set up as the protagonists in the description, but it seems like Ethan is the actual protagonist.
-Ethan is hyperlinked in Jack's description but not in his first mention earlier.
-Is the "various footage" claim in Marguerite's section cited?
-" It is later revealed that Eveline had taken control of the Baker family after they took in her and Mia from a shipwreck, and before their infection, the Bakers were just an ordinary family." this seems like a repeat of already known information at the end of Marguerite's section.
-The description states Eveline is a child, but Eveline's section only refers to her as an old lady. Is the child an illusion? I'd elaborate.
-What is the Mutamycete?
Reception
[edit]-Looks good.
Overall
[edit]Very well done article overall. Will be happy to pass once the above is addressed. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 02:20, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 Done. About eveline being old, I added more info about her [1]. Greenish Pickle! (🔔) 02:32, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- Looks good. Happy to pass this article. Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 02:45, 15 April 2024 (UTC)