Talk:Baghban (2003 film)/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 19:52, 14 August 2021 (UTC)
- Non-free use rationale is up-to-date.
- This does not say the runtime is 183 minutes.
- "It premiered" → "The film premiered"
- #Plot and #Cast both look good.
- "he other projects" → "his other projects"
- Add a serial comma after "screenplay, dialogue".
- "the film was announced about a month later" – source?
- See ref #6
- The length between July (7) and October (10) is a bit more than a month. Maybe change it to "the film was officially announced in October" or "the film was announced months later" (though the first option is preferred). Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 15:54, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
- Removed --—Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 22:38, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
- The length between July (7) and October (10) is a bit more than a month. Maybe change it to "the film was officially announced in October" or "the film was announced months later" (though the first option is preferred). Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 15:54, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
- See ref #6
- Add a serial comma after Richa Sharma.
- Final three sections all look good. No issues there.
- Mark references from The Hindu with "|url-access=subscription".