Talk:Bad Bunny/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: HĐ (talk · contribs) 04:06, 9 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing this real soon. I only know Bad Bunny by name, so I hope this will be a completely subjective review, HĐ (talk) 04:06, 9 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Any specific information on the record label that he was first signed to?
breakthrough single "Soy Peor" Did it chart on any chart?
Ditto with the popular singles
I don't think you need to indicate the Vega Baja municipality as it's not considered notable
For the infobox: keep birth place in the format (city, country), neighborhood should be excluded

Early life

Link salsa, merengue, ballad (or any music genre wherever possible)
Is Bad Bunny mostly known as a rapper or a singer? If he is well known as both, I would suggest avoiding elegant variations such as "the rapper", "the singer"... Keep it either "Martinez" or "Bad Bunny", wherever possible

Career beginnings

YouTube views should not be included
Be consistent with either "remix" or "re-mix"

We should include that he just won the Best Artist of the Year in 2022 at the 2022 VMA Awards. — Preceding unsigned comment added by David1mac (talk • contribs) 18:55, 29 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Int'l success

hit number-one → hit number one
It says that "Mia" peaked at number 5, but the lead says that it peaked at number 3. Please revise this
The Instagram bit can be removed because it's trivial
Avoid unattributed quotes i.e. "windswept 80s stadium rock" (see WP:ATTRIBUTION)
Link Alexis Petridis
including specially-priced student tickets isn't this a common practice? I'd suggest removing it
The chemistry between the two was so strong "The chemistry" is confusing. Do you mean the working relationship or their performance on the song?
The song garnered 2.5 million views on YouTube within a day of its release.[42] Trivia

More coming soon. In the meantime, feel free to proceed @Basilisk4u:. HĐ (talk) 04:11, 10 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

YHLQMDLG, Las que no iban a salir and El Último Tour Del Mundo

Bad Bunny announced the album YHLQMDLG on February 27, 2020, during an appearance on The Tonight Show Starring Jimmy Fallon Is this necessary?
at the time is vague and should be replaced with i.e. as of (...)
The album title was first mentioned during a sequence of the accompanying music video Again, not really relevant to this article. This can be discussed at the album's article, but not here
Songs from the album were played on an Instagram live stream Again, not significant/relevant to this article
third solo studio album (fourth overall) Las que no iban a salir vs. third studio album, El Último Tour Del Mundo This is confusing

Artistry

The samples are too long (per WP:NFCC non-free audio samples should be no longer than 10% of the original song). Take "Si Veo a Tu mama", for example, the sample should be maximum 17 seconds because the original length is 2:50

The rest of the article looks good. Putting this on hold for seven days until my concerns are addressed, HĐ (talk) 03:50, 12 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hey! Thanks so much for your review, I'll get on it as soon as possible :) Just started holiday break from teaching. Basilisk4u (talk) 07:59, 19 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Basilisk4u: No worries. Just ping me when you're ready. If it takes too long (> 2 weeks), however, I may as well fail this... so plan ahead! HĐ (talk) 06:35, 23 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

After two weeks of inactivity, I regret to fail this GAN, though very unfortunate Should you wish to renominate this, make sure to resolve my points here before proceeding. Good luck, HĐ (talk) 07:26, 6 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]