Talk:Bad Blood (2004)/GA1

GA Review

Two featured bouts were featured on hmm. very very similar to Bad Blood 2003. Featured is repetitive.
WWE's brand, a storyline expansion of the promotion where employees are assigned to wrestling brands "{WWE's brand)" isn't a storyline expansion. Raw, SD, and ECW are but "WWE's brand" is not
- I think I got it.
The main rivalry rivalry repetitive.
World Heavyweight championship capitalize the "c" in championship
On the May 24 episode of Raw, Triple H pleaded with Bischoff to lift Michaels suspension and reinstate him back in the roster, when did Michaels get suspended?
~~the roster were in unsuccessful in doing so. ---> the roster was unsuccessful in doing so.~~
The result of the fight gave Bischoff the authority to schedule how did the result of a fight give him authority?
- He had enough with HBK and Triple H attacking each other, that he scheduled the HIAC match.
- Explain that in the article iMatthew (talk) 20:23, 7 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  - So, your saying that this ---> "The result of the brawl between Michaels and Triple H gave Bischoff the authority to schedule Triple H and Michaels in a Hell in a Cell match at Bad Blood", isn't explained enough? -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 21:27, 7 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    - I'm just saying that it should be explained how he got the authority, but I guess it's fine. iMatthew (talk) 23:32, 7 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
      - I know what your trying to say, but Bischoff was the GM and had the authority to do whatever he wanted. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 00:02, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
World Heavyweight championship again with the lowercase "c"
~~keep consistency with "championship" and "title" pick either "World Heavyweight Championship" or "the title"~~
[performed a chokeslam] lifted Eugene by the throat and slammed him down to the mat remove [performed a chokeslam] and end the link at "slammed"
Intercontinental champion the lowercase "c" again (twice more)
Intercontinental title keep consistency again (twice more)
~~remove ["killed off"]~~
explain a legend vs. legend killer match
- This is what I wrote: "a match in which a veteran wrestler is scheduled in a match against a younger wrestler."
  - Fine. iMatthew (talk) 20:23, 7 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
make it two on one could use better wording
- "to Orton's aid."
  - Better. iMatthew (talk) 20:21, 7 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
~~Jargon for removal: spinning heel kick~~
~~Jargon for removal: Arm trap crossface~~
~~security wall --> security barricade~~
~~Remove this sentence "Back and forth action took place between Orton and Benjamin."~~
~~Intercontinental title again~~
~~Remove this sentence "The match was controlled by Victoria, Stratus, Lita, and Kim in several spots in the match."~~
Lita then drove Kim's head into the mat, as Lita went for the pin, Stratus rolled Lita up for the pinfall victory, thus Stratus' becoming Women's champion for a fifth time. run-on. split into two sentences.
Jargon for removal: feint leg drop
- How should the sentence read?
  - Not sure, try to come up with a way to re-word it. iMatthew (talk) 20:23, 7 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
~~World Heavyweight title, again~~
~~The Divas match and the Eugene/Coachman match are preliminary matches. Only the last two are main event matches, so change the first sentence of the WHC paragraph to the first main event match.~~
Triple H got the advantage, as he was able to counter a drop Michaels on his head do you meant "to counter AND drop Michaels on his head"
- No, Triple H blocked a piledriver attempt from HBK.
  - Then fix it, as it reads poorly. "counter a drop Michaels" iMatthew (talk) 20:23, 7 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  - Fixed. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 21:27, 7 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Triple H bring the steel steps and hit Michaels with it change to "with them"
~~and performed a dove with his elbow cocked onto Triple H's chest --> and performed a dive with his elbow cocked onto Triple H's chest~~
other on-screen talent should be in the event section
- There's no room.
  - You have to make room them, move pictures. Because it needs to be in there. iMatthew (talk) 20:21, 7 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  - Done. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 21:27, 7 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
write at the start, that Lita being pregnant was scripted
- I think I got it.
  - It's fine, could be better, but it's fine. iMatthew (talk) 20:21, 7 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
~~World Heavyweight championship, twice again~~
~~World Heavyweight title, thrice again~~
This scenario led to Edge to sneak behind Orton and speared him. tense issues
~~Intercontinental championship, again~~
Canadian Online Explorer should be in italics.
- Actually, it isn't suppose to be in italics.
  - It is that way in SummerSlam (2003), an FA. iMatthew (talk) 20:21, 7 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    - Well, its not listed here per any sort. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 21:27, 7 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
~~refs are not needed in the results table, and link everything in the table as it is an exception to WP:OVERLINK~~
Online World of Wrestling, PWWEW.net, ProWrestlingHistory, have not been proven reliable, so they all need to be replaced
- This is for GA, not FA.
  - Nothing is ever "just for GA and not for FA." That doesn't exist. They need to be replaced. iMatthew (talk) 20:21, 7 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    - Have been replaced. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 21:27, 7 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
~~the publisher needs to be changed from WWE to World Wrestling Entertainment.~~

Long list, but you have a week to complete it. Best of luck, iMatthew (talk) 17:47, 6 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Got everything, but left some comments. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 20:17, 7 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

GA pass. iMatthew (talk) 23:32, 7 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]