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Reviewer: CycloneIsaac (talk · contribs) 06:44, 20 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Reviewing later.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 06:44, 20 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • The lead is awfully short, even for a small article. You should expand it to include more on operations and development.
  • Background section is redundant as majority of the prose is mentioned again in the development section.
  • BRAC University has built a ground station at its Mohakhali campus to analyse data and photographs sent from space for further research purposes.[citation needed]
  • $500,000 in which currency?
    • Not sure..when I converted USD to pounds, it didn't match, so I am just going to use pounds so its more clear. Kees08 (Talk)
  • "inaugurated 25 May," Of which year?
  • Future work section belongs on the Birds-1 article more (and possibly an article on the Bird program).
  • "where it was launched from the Kibō module." Should be mentioned in the main part of the article.

Should be it for now.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 02:23, 6 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]