Talk:Azotobacter/GA1
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Reviewer: Jimfbleak - talk to me? 10:28, 27 October 2010 (UTC)
Not much to fix, I think
- File:Azotobacter cyst.jpg doesn't appear to exist
- It was deleted after nomination (nice fair use image). Sigh. Commented out.
- the following need links or explanation: microbe, autonomic, intima, pH, cocoon
- Wikilinked all and explained autonomic and intima. pH is a standard term, which is not easy to explain in a few words. Microbe and cocoon are relatively common words.
- The outer part is called exine has a hexagonal crystalline structure. — doesn't quite make sense
- Rewrote. Thanks for comments! Materialscientist (talk) 11:05, 27 October 2010 (UTC)
Jimfbleak - talk to me? 10:28, 27 October 2010 (UTC)
I've linked Ph, no other concerns, so I'll send it on its way Jimfbleak - talk to me? 12:16, 27 October 2010 (UTC)