Talk:Ayesha Takia/GA2
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 05:37, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
This is a quickfail. There are items that need to be addressed before a serious GA review can begin of this page. They primarily pertain to sourcing.
The priority areas are the YouTube references—7, 9 through 11, and 28. They do not provide verification to reliable sources. Reference 11 is no longer available. Reference 7, a reupload of an old TV commercial, probably breaks WP:COPYVIOEL. The others are official sources but do not suffice to support the cited claims that Takia appeared in such-and-such video. YouTube references only work when they contain ABOUTSELF information or are published by reliable sources.
There is also still an uncited passage, which was a major issue in your quickfail #1: Takia garnered acclaim for her performance as a voiceover artist named Sehar. She then starred in comedy De Taali. The film did not perform well at the box office and earned poor critical reviews.
I will leave some incidental suggestions:
- Is there any sourcing about her departure from the film industry? Seems like a big content hole, though the Indian entertainment press strikes me as a bit deferential. She just kinda stopped, maybe because of her conversion to Islam?
- I had to look up Complan because I didn't know what it was. Sure, I'm not Indian, but that would make sense to do for the benefit of unfamiliar readers.