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Just received a message saying the article for Automated Dispensing Cabinet is up for deletion already? I just started creating the article yesterday. I have maintained a completely neutral standpoint, and the only product names that could have caused an issue are generics (morphine, hydromorphone). This is my first article, but I am close to perfectly positive that I am staying within the criteria for creating a page. I am not out to promote a product of mine in any way. I am not out to bash anyone's products. Please let me know why someone felt the need to flag my page. If I don't hear back, I will be removing the speedy deletion mark. Matt Reese (talk) 18:13, 10 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Um, since you created the article you are not allowed to remove the speedy tag. Other than one or two phrases that seem overly promotional, however, I agree with your assessment of the neutrality of the article. 24.4.101.72 (talk) 18:18, 10 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Agree with opinion by 24.4.101.72 above. Given the consensus, will substitute the speedy delete tag for another, such as {{tone}}.--Technopat (talk) 18:33, 10 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Done a bit of cleanup but still needs a bit more done to take the edge off some of the more promo–style language.--Technopat (talk) 19:01, 10 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Your tone didn't bother me until the above post. I never wrote that you had removed the tag - I responded to your statement that you would. Here's an idea: next time somebody offers you advice, don't turn around and compare them to a security guard in a negative way. 24.4.101.72 (talk) 00:01, 11 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]