Talk:Autobahn (album)/GA1
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Reviewer: 100cellsman (talk · contribs) 05:15, 3 February 2022 (UTC)
A great album. Will review. 웃OO 05:15, 3 February 2022 (UTC)
- "The authors noted other than a rare occurrence of flute and guitar, the album was created on a synthesizer and drum machine..." This feels wonky to me. I would first say its created on a synthesizer and drum machine.
- Tried to re-phrase. Hope it's good. Andrzejbanas (talk) 11:20, 4 February 2022 (UTC)
- "Van Matre found "Autobahn" "an impression of…" I would personally refer to the song title as just the title track here, just so the quotation marks don't bump into each other. Same with "Reynolds said "Autobahn" "sounds like…"
- Good call, i've changed it both places. Andrzejbanas (talk) 11:20, 4 February 2022 (UTC)
That's all I could find really. Great work! 웃OO 05:49, 4 February 2022 (UTC)
- Awesome! I think I've covered it all @100cellsman:. Andrzejbanas (talk) 11:20, 4 February 2022 (UTC)