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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:56, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 22:56, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Add a comma after "April 29, 2008" per MOS:DATECOMMA.
  • Add a serial comma after "Milgram experiments".
  • "Milgram experiments" → "Milgram experiment" (consistency with #Production)
  • Add a serial comma after "Grand Central Terminal".
  • "10pm" → "10{{nbsp}}pm" (10 pm) per MOS:TIME.
  • If you add a quote to the lead, you have to recite a source per WP:QUOTE.

Plot

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Production

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  • "guest starring" → "guest-starring" (both uses)  Done
  • Add a serial comma after "Milgram experiment".  Done
  • Also add a serial comma after Mo Rocca.  Done
  • Various references in this section are dead. I'll point them out but an archive or replacement needs to be found for each of them.  Done
  • Reference in the caption, which is also used in prose, is dead.  Done
  • The first reference in this section is dead.  Done
  • "and who faces serious repercussions" is not part of the quote.
    • Changed.
  • The current-live reference after "like to appear on the show" doesn't show any text.
  • In the reference after Homicide: Life on the Street, I don't think the use of "|quote=" is necessary since it's recited later on.  Done
  • Reference after "event" is also dead.  Done
  • Why is there a summary of the episode in this section? I would remove it.  Done
  • The reference after "pillow fight" (from Just Jared) is not reliable per Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Noticeboard/Archive 266#Just Jared.
  • With the archive not showing any content and the link not working anymore, the reference after "appeared as himself" is dead.

Reception

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  • Try lowering the use of quotes in this section with the help of WP:RECEPTION.  Done
  • Recite sources at the end of each quote per WP:QUOTE.  Done
  • The reference from The Radio Times is dead.
    • Updated.
  • Same issues for the references after "by Rook", "grand exit", and "unsung roles".  Done

References

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  • Archive all archivable references (either manually or with this tool). Keep in mind that references from The Futon Critic can only be archived with archive.today.
  • Instead of "(subscription required)", mark that reference with "|url-access=subscription".  Done
  • Most of my comments on references are in #Production above.
  • Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".  Done

Progress

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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While I am grateful for the pass (and review), it was a bit premature. I'm working on finishing the last of the points raised now. - JuneGloom07 Talk 18:02, 1 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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