Talk:Australian weasel shark/GA1
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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 18:41, 8 December 2013 (UTC)
Looks pretty strong, as ever.
- "John Stevens and Glen Cuthbert in 1983.[2] Its scientific description was authored by William White, Peter Last, and Leonard Compagno" Do we have articles about any of these people? We certainly do for Zootaxa.
- Added some links.
- "The large, oval eyes possess nictitating membranes and have a notched posterior rim" Plural eyes, but singular rims?
- Fixed.
- "octopuses such as Callistoctopus" Callistoctopus species?
- Added "spp."
- "such as that sharks over 90 cm (35 in) long eat almost nothing else" Do you need "as"?
- Removed the "as".
- "(see above)" WP:SELF?
- Changed to "...habitat shift toward coral reefs".
- "particularly for smaller sharks; other cephalopods, mud lobsters, crabs, and echinoderms are rarely consumed." This reads oddly; how about adding "in addition," before "other cephalopods"?
- Divided into two sentences.
- I'm assuming we don't know how long they live? Are those that are caught used for anything?
- There's no longevity data. I looked for references about them being utilized but there wasn't any, so they may be discarded.
- Links added.
- A distribution category would be good.
- Added one.
Very good, as ever. J Milburn (talk) 18:41, 8 December 2013 (UTC)
- Let me know of further issues. -- Yzx (talk) 21:28, 8 December 2013 (UTC)
- Very happy with the responses; promoting now. Great work! J Milburn (talk) 16:53, 9 December 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. -- Yzx (talk) 01:18, 10 December 2013 (UTC)
- Very happy with the responses; promoting now. Great work! J Milburn (talk) 16:53, 9 December 2013 (UTC)