Talk:Augustine Magdalena Waworuntu

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Did you know... that Augustine Waworuntu, the first woman mayor of Manado, had her official residence in a hotel built of bamboo?

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The result was: promoted by The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 01:34, 30 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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~~... that Augustine Waworuntu's official residence as the mayor of Manado was a bamboo hotel with a rafter as its roof?~~ Source: Algemeen Indisch dagblad, 26 August 1950

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Herbert Edwin Bradley

Created by Jeromi Mikhael (talk). Self-nominated at 09:48, 7 July 2020 (UTC).[reply]

Like the hook, though maybe good to mention she was first female mayor of Manado (just an opinion) if the hook could be kept succinct. Article is new and long enough, sourced (as is hook), no copyvio detected, and QPQ done. Al Ameer (talk) 18:17, 9 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Al Ameer son: Here is an alt that also gets rid of the apostrophe-s in the bolded link:
ALT1: ~~... that Augustine Waworuntu, the first female mayor of Manado, had her official residence in a bamboo hotel with a rafter as its roof?~~
It's not quite clear what a rafter as its roof means. Roofs are often made from rafters. Maybe it should say with a roof made of rafters? I'm unable to read the foreign-language source to see what it says. Yoninah (talk) 23:54, 11 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Translation available here.Jeromi Mikhael (talk) 14:33, 13 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. According to your translation, there is no mention of rafters, but an apex roof, which is a roof shape. So the article description should be changed to something like: and her official residence as a mayor was a hotel built of bamboo with an apex roof. and the hook could be rewritten:
ALT2: ... that Augustine Waworuntu, the first female mayor of Manado, had her official residence in a hotel built of bamboo with an apex roof?
Alternately, you might just want to write:
ALT3: ... that Augustine Waworuntu, the first female mayor of Manado, had her official residence in a hotel built of bamboo? Source: Algemeen Indisch dagblad, 26 August 1950 Yoninah (talk) 14:59, 13 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Roof is not quite important. Jeromi Mikhael (talk) 13:24, 29 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Jeromi Mikhael: thank you. Now we just need an inline cite for the fact that she was the first female mayor of Manado. Yoninah (talk) 13:29, 29 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Jeromi Mikhael: I don't mean on this template. Please add it to the article. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 13:36, 29 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Jeromi Mikhael (talk) 13:45, 29 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. Foreign-language ALT3 hook refs AGF and cited inline. Rest of review per Al Ameer son. ALT3 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 14:29, 29 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]