Talk:Assassination of Talaat Pasha/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Guettarda (talk · contribs) 18:32, 24 April 2021 (UTC) This is a fascinating read, and something a knew nothing about. Guettarda (talk) 18:32, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

This is excellent. I have very little to add.

Neubabelsberg redirects to Babelsberg; I'm not sure if it needs a link to de:Neubabelsberg
- Removed

Is Mr. Terzibashian's first name known?
- No, I checked the original trial transcript and it's not stated. Same with the prosecutor, Gollnick, whose first name is not stated in any source.
The following section begins with "His wife Christine..." A new section should be more "stand alone".
- Reworded, thank you!

I'm curious about the choice to refer to Adolf von Gordon as "Gordon" rather than "von Gordon"
- I double checked and that's the form both Hofmann and Ihrig use. (t · c) buidhe 01:40, 25 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Tessa Hofmann is linked twice in the body of the article, as is Carolyn Dean.
- I feel like these mentions are too sparse and far apart so that the reader has likely forgotten who they were before getting to the second mention. (t · c) buidhe 01:40, 25 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Guettarda I believe I've addressed everything above. Thanks for reviewing the article! (t · c) buidhe 01:40, 25 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]