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GA Review

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Reviewer: Ironholds (talk) 13:24, 17 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lede

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Motivation

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  • "business-related concerns. Businesses are often concerned " -repetition
  • "often both an expense both money-wise and time-wise" - repetition
  • "Primary concerns for roadmaps for the adoption of new technologies tends" - repetition. Also, "concerns" is plural while "tends" is singular.
  • "This enforces that any existing object-oriented code will " - enforces/ensures.
     Done all of the above --Shirik (Questions or Comments?) 18:32, 17 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Implementation

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