Talk:Askeladd/GA1
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Reviewer: Kung Fu Man (talk · contribs) 20:09, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
Creation
[edit]- This sentence feels a bit odd: "While strange, he felt like it was a product of chance."
- Done
- The second paragraph feels like it needs some tweaking, as it's introducing things to the reader while assuming the reader is already aware of them (interactions with other characters we haven't heard about, his character traits etc).
- Revised. I forgot to introduce Prince Canute.
Reception
[edit]- I believe the paper title should be italicized, but also make note it is a paper so people understand what's being referenced.
- Added italics for every publication.
That's...actually all the issues I have. Overall this is a pretty solid read and a surprisingly interesting character.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 20:09, 20 October 2023 (UTC) @Kung Fu Man: Thanks for the review-Tintor2 (talk) 21:39, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
Alright, checked sources 34, 36 and 37 among others for accurate statements, passing.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 21:58, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
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