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Kind of breaks NPOV a bit here. "Aryaka's groundbreaking WAN Optimization as-a-Service combines Cloud-based, purpose-built WAN Optimization technology with enterprise-grade connectivity utilizing a dedicated core network based on globally distributed Points of Presence (POPs) and" etc etc etc... -- Resuna (talk) 19:31, 26 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Yes indeed, the typical fluff from marketing. I tried to do one pass removing the promotion. Please work on it more when you have time. It also used the typical style of capitalizing all sorts of words, perhaps to make them Sound More Important? W Nowicki (talk) 20:28, 7 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]