Talk:Aruba at the 1996 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 06:59, 29 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

As ever, the data tables could do with the addition of the "scope=col" field to improve accessibility per MOS:DTT

"he took part in the 221.85 kilometers (137.85 miles)" - the convert template is required for the distance of the men's road race and the adj=on field is needed in this instance
"The gold emdal was won" - typo; should be medal

"Faro took part in the Men's under 76 kg competition" - decapitalize Men's
"recording a mark for this phase of the competition of 112.5 kg.a" - remove the "a" after the period
"and failed at 142.5 kg in his third and final attempt;" - try
"the silver medal was won by" - taken to avoid close reptition

A good amount of effort has been put into this article. Only minor quibbles need to be actioned. MWright96 (talk) 08:23, 29 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]