Talk:Arthur Montour Sr.

== Pure review

On your heading, try to see if there was a major encounter with the NY police that can maybe popularize him even more. Other than that, the heading was great! Brady.timm2 (talk) 01:39, 25 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

With the summary bodies, try to see if you can get a bit of information that regards him other than the fact that he led protests. During these protests, did they get violent, or what were the specific protests for, was there a popular one? So on and so forth, but I think this is a great first draft, and you did a good job!