Talk:Arthur Jackson (sport shooter)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 04:59, 9 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'm going to try to cut into this sport backlog a bit, and I'll review the article shortly. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:59, 9 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Didn't see much of anything in a first read-through, so I'll do a second one tonight to make sure I'm not missing anything. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 18:27, 12 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Here's what I found:

"Clarence H. White School of Modern Photography.[2]During" space needed after ref.
You use both "three positions" and "3 Positions" Keep consistent if you can. Also,why are some capitalized and others not?

Very minor stuff, article on hold and will be passed when fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:18, 13 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review! Sorry I've been gone most of the week, but I believe that I have addressed these points. Judging by the style of other articles (and what makes the most sense, honestly) is not capitalizing the events and using "three" rather than "3", so I have gone ahead and changed all (hopefully) the entries based on that. Let me know if there's anything else that needs to be done! Canadian Paul 14:24, 13 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Not a problem, I can understand that. Looks good now so I'll pass the article. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:56, 14 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Cheers! Thanks again for the review! Canadian Paul 19:32, 14 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]