Talk:Arthur Honeyman

Needs improvement

<COPY> from here:

[...] Footnote 7 is a bare reference; footnote 3 lacks an access date; the EL section should be removed as if an EL is used as a source it does not go into an EL section; the W:LEDE section should be expanded; then overall it needs expansion, for instance his date of birth and date of death are missing as are the years as to the moves; lastly the career section jumps around instead of chronological order which gets confusing. [...] Aboutmovies (talk) 18:16, 6 December 2016 (UTC)

<END OF COPY> --Martina Nolte _talk 07:15, 7 December 2016 (UTC)

PS:

• WP:LEDE
• years of the "moves": 1981 and 2007.  Done

--Martina Nolte _talk 07:32, 7 December 2016 (UTC) update 02:28, 12 December 2016 (UTC)

• date of birth; May 10, 1940  Done
• date of death; December 08, 2008  Done

--Martina Nolte _talk 04:23, 8 December 2016 (UTC) update 02:28, 12 December 2016 (UTC)

• footnote 7  Done
• footnote 3 access date  Done
• EL section removed  Done
• career section chronological order  Done

--Martina Nolte _talk 02:28, 12 December 2016 (UTC)