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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 02:22, 16 February 2015 (UTC)
I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman 02:22, 16 February 2015 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
- "stands on a triangular lot and intersected by Main Street and Lonsdale Avenue," rm and
- "This attempt to revitalize and preserve historic sites was not unique, more than 4000 such organizations existed by 1977 to re-use or save the site from destruction" The way it's written makes it sound like 4,000 organizations sprang up to help Art's Auto, rather than historical preservation in general; reword.
- "has continued to retain its the historic features" rm the
Article on hold, will pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 03:07, 16 February 2015 (UTC)
- Wizardman - Thanks and good catch with the "site" instead of "sites", but I also rectified it by clarifying this as a local attempt amidst the 4,000+ organizations nationwide. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 17:26, 16 February 2015 (UTC)
- Article reads better there now, so it now passes GA status. Wizardman 03:10, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
- Wizardman - Thanks and good catch with the "site" instead of "sites", but I also rectified it by clarifying this as a local attempt amidst the 4,000+ organizations nationwide. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 17:26, 16 February 2015 (UTC)