Talk:Arizona State Route 347/GA1
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Reviewer: Racepacket (talk) 03:29, 10 March 2011 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
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- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- "where the a farm appears" - delete "the"
- Done. --PCB 04:16, 10 March 2011 (UTC)
- "about 33,000 vehicles used the route on an average day." - can you say at what point on the route?
- Done --PCB 04:29, 10 March 2011 (UTC)
- "where the a farm appears" - delete "the"
- B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- What about adding Harrah's casino to the route description?
- What evidence do you have of this? Harrah's casino seems to be in San Diego. --PCB 04:16, 10 March 2011 (UTC)
- Done --PCB 04:29, 10 March 2011 (UTC)
- Official website and map shows address as 15406 Maricopa Road, Maricopa, AZ 85239.
- Please add to the route description the at grade rail crossing just before W Maricopia Casa Grande Hwy.
- Where? Can you give me a source? --PCB 04:16, 10 March 2011 (UTC)
- Ref #3.
- Done --PCB 04:29, 10 March 2011 (UTC)
- Where? Can you give me a source? --PCB 04:16, 10 March 2011 (UTC)
- What about adding Harrah's casino to the route description?
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars.
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- This article represents significant work by its author. Putting review on hold for you to address concerns. Racepacket (talk) 04:09, 10 March 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you. I believe I have fixed all errors. --PCB 04:31, 10 March 2011 (UTC)
- This article represents significant work by its author. Putting review on hold for you to address concerns. Racepacket (talk) 04:09, 10 March 2011 (UTC)
- Pass or Fail:
Thank you for your quick responses. One final point and we are done — why does the lead paragraph say 40,000 vehicles per day, but the highest total in the body of the article is only 33,000 vehicles? Thanks! Racepacket (talk) 04:32, 10 March 2011 (UTC)
- I want the lead to be less specific. In addition, the AADT is higher elsewhere. --PCB 04:35, 10 March 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you for the explanation and congratulations on another Good Article. Racepacket (talk) 04:43, 10 March 2011 (UTC)