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Reviewer: M.Mario (talk · contribs) 16:21, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Disambigs, Refs & External

  • There are 2 Disambigs
  • Add Publishers for all References (2,3,4,5)
  • Add video to Reference 1. also does this reference work?
  • For reference 1 and 17, Capshaw isnt the author, she is the person being interviewed.
  • Fill out references.

Infobox

  • Everything is fine.

Lead

  • "Arizona has a "quirky" personality, and a costume designed to appeal to her young patients, including roller shoes and a HollyHobbie pink scrub cap" -> Arizona has a "quirky" personality, and is well known for wearing roller skates and a Holly Hobbie pink hat, designed to appeal to her younger patients. Link Holly Hobbie.
  • Actor names in lead (brackets).
  • "citing the addition of Capshaw as Arizona as an element of the season of which she was most proud" -> citing the addition of Capshaw to the cast as an element of the season of which she was most proud of.
  • Im not sure if the mention of Erica is needed in the Lead.

Plot

  • In my previous GA Review of Callie, you stated that you refer to characters by their surnames, however you refer to Arizona Robbins as Arizona.
    • I did not develop this article the way I did with the other characters who have GAs from me. This article was almost ready from another user, but abandoned, so I just did some minor changes and nominated. I have changed all first names to surnames. TRLIJC19 (talk) 19:20, 8 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "two embark on a relationship, but when Callie's father (Héctor Elizondo)" -> Name of the father?
  • Link Seattle.
  • "Callie is dismayed to learn that Arizona doesn't want children. They come to the conclusion that they cannot continue their relationship, as they both want different things." -> Merge sentences.
  • "However after a shooter enters Seattle Grace with a vendetta for Derek Shepherd, Lexie Grey, and Richard Webber, they are in lockdown together, and the two reconcile" -> Actor Names needed, "vendetta", needs explaining.
    • I've added actors, but I am not elaborating on vendetta. Vendetta is defined as "A blood feud in which the family of a murdered person seeks vengeance on the murderer or the murderer's family." The reason why the patient was seeking vengeance is clear, and it need not be elaborated; it has no effect on her storyline. The point was just that they were in lockdown together. TRLIJC19 (talk) 19:20, 8 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "However, a fight at the airport results in Arizona leaving for Africa without Callie, ending their relationship." -> Change Africa to Malawi.
  • "Eventually, Callie reveals that she is pregnant with Mark Sloan (Eric Dane)'s baby" -> need to explain how and why.
  • Carter Madison Grant - What?
  • "the two get in a car crash leaving Callie in critical condition" -> Odd turn of phrase.
  • "As the fifth year residents are coming close to the end of their residency, Robbins urges Alex Karev to become a fellow of hers, and subsequently is involved in a plane crash, endangering her and her co-workers' lives" -> You need to go into more detail here, and explain what residency. fellow is. A lot of complicated vocab. How do they end up in a plane crash?

Development

  • "Capshaw later extended her contract to appear in all of the season's remaining episodes" -> I dont think Capshaw extended her contract, most likely Rhimes did.
  • Italics for BuddyTV.
  • Shortly after her arrival in the show, Arizona became a love-interest for Callie Torres. Add surname of actress in brackets.
  • "What a Difference a Day Makes" sees them experience difficulties as a result of Callie's family rejecting" -> In the above, it just says her father.

Reception

  • Bailey -> Link/Actor Name.`

I'll get started on addressing the issues tomorrow. TRLIJC19 (talk) 04:58, 8 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Everything listed is done. TRLIJC19 (talk) 19:33, 8 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Great work, I am gladfully listing this as a GA! — M.Mario (T/C) 19:47, 8 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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