Talk:Arch Wolfe/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 15:23, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 13:35, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Added some cats.
He was in the MLB team's cat instead of the NFL one. I changed it.
Change lead to American professional football.
"Chicago / St. Louis Cardinals from 1933" to "Chicago / St. Louis Cardinals of the National Football League (NFL) from 1933"
No date for the pic I guess?
"He worked with a rug-cleaning business owned by Charles Bidwill which led to his opportunity in sports" change to "future Chicago Cardinals executive Charles Bidwell"
Once you change the above, we can probably remove "which led to his opportunity in sports" otherwise that sentence gets a little wordy?
If you do the stuff above, then unlink Chicago Cardinals in the first sentence of the next section.
"He served in the position of business manager and, starting in 1936, acted as their general manager" Add commas where bolded.
Did you see in the navbox where it says he was an assistant coach? What's that all about?
Is there any info on where he went to high school or college or anything?