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Assessment

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This is a good, comprehensive looking article for a Munro. A quick check against the GA criteria suggest the following improvements:

  • Seems well written though phrases like nodding acquaintance could be improved.
  • The geography section is quite dense and could be made easier to follow.
  • The lede should be expanded to summarise the article rather than just introduce the subject.
  • Other checks against the MoS should be made.
  • The Geography section needs in-line cites from the sources listed in the References section.
  • Sources look reliable for this subject - I've corrected the mispelling of Donald Bennet which appears on many, many Munro articles.
  • Sources are used but need in-line refs adding to avoid OR criticism.
  • Appears to deal with most aspects - may want to expand to include etymology and classification - give more context to this particular mountain - any incidents/history?

Assess as B for the time being. Nick Ottery (talk) 16:00, 5 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]