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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 20:38, 24 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

The very day of nomination, I have grabbed this; will start tomorrow though --K. Peake 20:38, 24 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • "sixth and final single is wrong since the EP is supported by just two singles
  • Target hip hop to Hip hop music
  • "between rap and vocals." → "between rapping and singing."
  • "in South Korea: it debuted on the" → "in South Korea; it debuted atop the"
  • "which made it become the longest running number one song on" → "becoming the longest running chart topper on"
  • "It also charted at number one on the" → "The song further charted at number one on the US"
  • "to being charted one of the top ten songs in" → "to charting within the top 10 in" per MOS:NUM
  • "The single was the most-successful song in" → "It was the most successful song of"
  • "was certified platinum by" → "was certified platinum in the country by"
  • Target Korea Music Content Association to Gaon Music Chart
  • Add some info about the video
  • "He gave his first televised live performance of "Any Song" on" → "Zico first performed "Any Song" on"
  • Mention when the performance was
  • "promote the track on" → "promote the song on"

 Done everything else

Writing and composition

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  • Retitle to Background and composition
  • "by him and Poptime." → "by him, while additional production was handled by Poptime."
  • "He elaborated about the process behind songwriting" → "He elaborated on the process behind the songwriting"
  • ""Any Song" is described as a" → "Musically, "Any Song" has been described as a"
  • [5][6] should only be at the end of the sentence
  • Target hip hop to Hip hop music
  • "song[7] featuring a" → "song,[7] featuring a"
  • "the song features an" → "the song includes an"
  • "being backed by an" → "that is backed by an"
  • "and runs for 3:47." → "and has a duration of 3:47."

 Done all

Release and promotion

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  • Img looks good
  • "to announce the single's title and release date." → "that announced the single's title of "Any Song", and its release date."
  • "for streaming services and digital download on January 13, 2020, as a single in various countries through" → "for digital download and streaming in various countries as a single by"
  • "as an album track on" → "as the sixth track on"
  • Remove wikilink on extended play
  • "Random Box released on" → "Random Box, released on"
  • "numerous Korean celebrities participated" → "numerous South Korean celebrities participated"
  • Trim the list of celebs that participated as it reads like a supermarket list currently, though I appreciate the effort at least
  • "in Korea before spreading internationally." → "in South Korea, before becoming a trend internationally."
  • "The challenge videos received" → "The dance challenge videos received"

 Done all

Awards

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 Done all

Commercial performance

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  • Img looks good
  • "was a huge success in South Korea." → "was a commercial success in South Korea."
  • "to the top of" → "to the top position of"
  • The "including" part should come after "streaming site's real-time charts" and does not need brackets
  • "The single remained at the top of all" → "The song remained atop all"
  • "for seven consecutive days." → "for a full week."
  • "On Korea's largest" → "On South Korea's largest
  • "for 8 weeks." → "for eight weeks."
  • Add release years of "Good Day" and "Gangnam Style" in brackets and mention at the end of the sentence that it tied them for second most consecutive weeks atop the chart
  • "It dropped to number two" → "The song fell down to number two"
  • "of February 22." → "of February 22, 2020."
  • "On the first week of March," → "In the first week of that year's March,"
  • "previously held by" → "which was previously held by"
  • Add release year of "Love Scenario" in brackets
  • "The single spent" → "The song spent"
  • "in the chart's top ten before" → "in the top 10 of the chart." since the rest of the sentence is useless per WP:CHARTTRAJ; however, keep the rest of the increase/decreases since they do not violate this rule
  • "also topped the component" → "also topped the Gaon component"
  • "and two consecutive weeks respectively." → "and two consecutive weeks, respectively."
  • "in January and March" → "in both January and March"
  • "in South Korea based on" → "in South Korea, based on"
  • "It was eventually" → ""Any Song" was eventually"
  • Target Korea Music Content Association to Gaon Music Chart
  • "streams exceeding 100,000,000 units." → "streams exceeding 100,000,000 units in the country."
  • "debuted on the" → "debuted atop the US"
  • "at the top." → "at the top position."
  • "was eventually broken by BTS' "On" which earned" → "was later broken by BTS' "On" (2020), which spent"
  • "eighth chart entry and fourth song to become one of the top five" → "eighth entry and fourth song to reach the top five"
  • "The single remained on" → "The song remained on"
  • "and ranked as a top ten song in" → "and reached the top 10 of the charts in"

 Done all

Music video

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  • "released on January 9 and 10." → "that were released on January 9 and January 10, 2020, respectively."
  • "turning up at his house" → "arriving at his house" since this is more encyclopaedic
  • "Zico feels dejected as he supposedly planned..." where is this part backed up?
  • [57][5] should be put in numerical order
  • "The video ends with" → "The music video ends with"

 Done all

Track listing

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  • "Any song" → "Any Song"

 Done

Credits and personnel

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  • Good

Charts

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Weekly charts

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 Done all

Monthly chart

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  • Good

Certifications

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  • Good

Release history

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  • Label → Label(s)

 Done

See also

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  • Remove Random Box from here

 Done

References

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  • Copyvio score looks amazing at 7.4%; props for sure!!!
  • Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
  • Fix MOS:QWQ issues with refs 2, 3, 4, 15 and 27
  • Add language parameter for JP release on ref 14
  • Cite YTN News as publisher instead for ref 20 and target to YTN, plus fix MOS:QWQ issues
  • [Naver → Naver on ref 31
  • Cite Star TV as publisher instead for ref 33
  • Ref 38 is missing a trans title and fix MOS:QWQ issues
  • Cite No Cut News as publisher instead for ref 40 and wikilink
  • Fix MOS:CAPS issues with ref 41
  • Ref 60 can be removed and replaced with ref 54 since that backs up the info
  • ref. 60 supports "K-pop Hot 100" peak position while ref. 54 backs up "US World Digital Songs" position, how are they related?
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  • Good

Final comments and verdict

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  • Kyle Peake, thank you so much for taking this up so quickly. I have mostly fixed the issues pointed out by you and left two comments above. Also, can you take a look at the "Commercial performance" section once? I have added the line: "The song's commercial success has been attributed to the viral dance-challenge." which I'd initially forgotten. If you think the sentence needs a fix please feel free to suggest. I'm also thinking if this sentence should be added to the lead? --Ashleyyoursmile! 12:53, 25 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ashleyyoursmile Change "the viral dance-challenge" → "its viral dance challenge", plus you also need to make the fix that I explained in references after my previous mistake and then this article will be fine. Also no, I do not believe it needs to be included in the lead even though that looks sick at three paragraphs currently that will look even better on the GAN page soon!!! --K. Peake 12:57, 25 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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