Talk:Anushka Sharma/GA2

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Reviewer: FrB.TG (talk · contribs) 16:18, 9 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comments coming tomorrow. -- Frankie _talk 16:18, 9 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

"Along with her brother, Sharma co-founded the production company Clean Slate Films in 2014. They made their production debut with the successful crime thriller NH10 (2015), with Sharma portraying the lead character." → "In 2014, Sharma, along with her brother, co-founded the production company Clean Slate Films, whose first release was the crime thriller NH10 (2015), with Sharma portraying the lead."
"In addition to acting in films, Sharma is an ambassador for multiple brands"

Early life and modelling career

De-link Mumbai, as WP:OVERLINKING advises against linking well-known geographies.

Acting career

"Sharma's first acting role" → acting debut
"emerging as the second-highest grossing Hindi film of that year" – pipe second-highest ... that year to List of Bollywood films of 2008.
"It earned her a nomination for the Filmfare Award for Best Actress" – add her Filmfare debut nomination, too.
"After an absence of nearly two years from the screen, Sharma portrayed ~~the role of~~"
"for "hold[ing] her own" against ~~Aamir~~ Khan" as in this para there is only mention of this Khan.
"Critical reviews on the film were mixed;[48] writing ... writing that "she fills the stage" – two uses of the word "writing".
Add some more info on Dil Dhadakne Do.

Personal life and screen work

"Sharma is currently in a relationship with cricketer Virat Kohli" – see WP:CURRENTLY.

In the media

"Kalpana Nair of Firstpost stated that" – italicize Firstpost as it is a news source.
De-link Forbes Celebrity 100 as it does not link to India's Celebrity 100.
"a list based on income and popularity ~~across all~~ of India's celebrities"

References

Wiki-link and italicize Daily Bhaskar in ref 7. Also, it's "Dainik Bhaskar", not "Daily Bhaskar".
Ref 15 – Glamsham is not a good source to use.
Ref 17 – it is "The" New Indian Express.
Ref 26 – it should be simply NDTV.
Ref 40 – italicize International Business Times.
Ref 46 – ditto.
Ref 57 – wiki-link Forbes India.
Ref 60 – wiki-link CNN-IBN.
Ref 75 – The Times of India is a newspaper, so you know what to do.
Ref 76, 77, 78 – they are all published by Forbes India, not Forbes. Also, de-link it in ref 76.
Ref 80 – International Business Times should be in italics.
Ref 87 – remove Bollywood Hungama News Network as it is not an author.
Ref 89 – NDTV Movies → NDTV.
Ref 91 – Pinkvilla is too gossipy to be considered reliable.
Ref 92 – wiki-link Sify.
Ref 95 – Indicine ain't a reliable source. -- Frankie _talk 10:20, 10 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I have resolved all your queries excpet for a few:- Her role in Dil dhadakne Do was of a special appearance, so I don't think writing something about a small role is necessary. I can't find a replacable reliable source for Pinkvilla and Indicine. Yashthepunisher (talk) 14:26, 10 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]