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Nominator: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 22:48, 19 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Harper J. Cole (talk · contribs) 19:22, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]


I'll take this one on. --Harper J. Cole (talk) 19:22, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  • Harrison played college football for Georgia Institute of Technology and He attended the Georgia Institute of Technology An inconsistency: "the" precedes the college's name the second time but not the first time.
Fixed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Linked. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Linked. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • After injuries to teammates, he became a starter during his freshman year. It looks like only one teammate was injured (cornerback Mike Travis). Another, Toby Lantz moved position to cover for him, leaving a gap at safety that Harrison filled.
Fixed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • He was taken off the field by a stretcher and transported to the hospital, where he was cleared of any serious injuries. Maybe add that he was back playing the following week?
I'm not sure the source says that. What were you proposing? « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • You could add that he was waived in preseason to make it clearer that he missed out on making the full squad.[1]
Added. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • It's also worth stating that he didn't keep his place in the squad when the strike ended. I couldn't find any sources stating that specifically, but here's one listing the sixteen replacement players who stayed on the roster, with Harrison not among them.[2]
Added. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • His rather common name makes it hard to search for sources, but I did find one more reference, to him returning to college and graduating after his career. Worth adding?[3]
Added. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Other than that, all looking good. Harper J. Cole (talk) 20:24, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I think I have addressed/responded to everything Harper J. Cole. Thank you! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, I think that looks good now. As you say, the source doesn't specifically mention him returning from the injury, and it's already established that he was in all three replacement games. I'll promote the article now. Harper J. Cole (talk) 23:00, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]