Talk:Anomaly (Star Trek: Enterprise)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 22:21, 11 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 22:21, 11 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Nitpicks:

Critics criticised the actions of Captain Jonathan Archer (Scott Bakula) in the episode Green's review appears to be the only one that criticized Archer's actions; Epsicokhan doesn't seem to mention it. Maybe The actions of Captain Jonathan Archer (Scott Bakula) received criticism?
Captain Jonathan Archer (Scott Bakula) leads Lt. Malcolm Reed (Dominic Keating), don't think we need this comma
The Command Centre set What is this set? It is not mentioned anywhere else in this article's prose. Some context could be used here
Michelle Erica Green, whilst writing for TrekNation I don't think we need a whilst here. It's not like she was doing anything else.

My nitty picks are over. Placing on hold. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 22:40, 11 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! I've made those edits. Between you and me, I could never understand why they introduced the command centre - everything they did there they should have been able to do on the bridge. I think they needed a darkened room in which to plot. :) Miyagawa (talk) 22:49, 11 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your efforts; the article meets the GA criteria, I'll be promoting it shortly. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 22:52, 11 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]