Talk:Annika Zeyen

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Review: October 10, 2013. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Annika Zeyen appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 16 April 2013 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Annika Zeyen and Maria Kühn were both members of the wheelchair basketball team that was awarded Germany's highest sporting honour, the Silver Laurel Leaf?

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 15:42, 7 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article sometime today. Wizardman 15:42, 7 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

"She has also played the national team," played for the
- Y Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"was runner-up at 2010 World Championships" was the runner-up
- Y Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"Zeyen found ASV Bonn." starting off a paragraph like this feel like rather iffy writing. Can it be modified a bit? If nothing else at least changed found to joined.
- Y Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"which contained a number of former teammates and opponents from the University of Illinois." This implies to me that she went to Illinois, which I know is not the case since she went to Alabama. Can this be rewritten to avoid the confusion?
- Y Ooops. Wrong state. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"where majored in advertising" where she maintained.
- N No, "majored" is correct. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"Her team at the University Alabama" of Alabama
- Y Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"an game" a game
- Y Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"Academic All American" All-American should be hyphenated.
- Y Done. I still think it's kewl that you can be All-American without being American at all.
Do a run-though of the article to double-check the English, just to make sure there were no remaining missing word issues I missed.
- Y Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Article is now on hold, and I will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 02:00, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

All points addressed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Everything looks good, so the article passes. Wizardman 03:55, 10 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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