Talk:Anneliese van der Pol/GA1

GA Review

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Hi, this will be my first GA article review.

Reviewer: Monkeymanman (talk) 13:10, 26 August 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   See below.

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   See below.

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

   See below.

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

• The intro should summarise the whole article, it should ideally be between 2 and 3 paragraphs.
• Van der Pol's mother named her after Anne Frank after visiting the house where Frank hid, is poor grammer
• Van der Pol's family moved to her mother's native United States when she was three years old, and she retains dual citizenship between the Netherlands and the United States. is unsourced
• At the age of fifteen, she is also the youngest actresses in Theatrical History to play the role in a professional production does not seem to be in the source previous
• Van der Pol subsequently starred as "Laurey" in an Austin, Texas, musical theatre production of Oklahoma! from 2000 to 2001. Her performance earned her both an Austin Critics Table Award nomination for "Best Actress in a Musical" and an B. Iden Payne Nomination for "Best Featured Actress in a Musical". She was later cast as Chelsea Daniels, the best friend of the title character on the Disney Channel's That's So Raven, a role she played from 2002 to 2007. Just as the first season of "That's So Raven" began, she went back to Austin Musical Theatre to perform in "Celebrate: AMT," a performance highlighting all the shows the company had done up to then. She was a featured soloist. Van der Pol also appeared on the Disney Channel Games as a member of the Red Team; her teammates were Zac Efron, Kay Panabaker, Dylan Sprouse, Shin Koyamada, and Moises Arias. She was originally offered the role of Kim Possible but chose not to take the part. Anneliese also had a supporting role in Bratz: The Movie as Avery, a mean popular girl and best-friend to the main antagonist. does not have any sources
• Van der Pol is one of only three cast members of That's So Raven (along with T'Keyah Crystal Keymáh and Rondell Sheridan) not to star in a Disney Channel Original Movie, although she is the only cast member to star in a Walt Disney Theatrical Production. unsourced
• those are just some examples throughout the article where information is poorly sourced with inline citations
• none of the awards in the filmography are sourced
• sources follow different layouts. Some do not provide dates or publisher information at all.
• what makes youtube, Sh-k-boom.com, allheadlinenews.com, imageshack and break.com reliable
• source 20 is broken
• looks like there is some form of unresolved edit dispute recently. The neutrality of the inclusion regarding he DUI conviction has been questioned in the last few months
• The article requires quite a bit of cleaning to meet GA and don’t think it will be achieved in the next 7 days. Many refs can be deemed unreliable and the article is poorly sourced overall. Therefore i am failing the article for GA