Talk:Ankita Bhakat/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:50, 4 March 2019 (UTC)

Shall review this article. MWright96 (talk) 18:50, 4 March 2019 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Early life

• Delink sport because it is a common term per WP:OVERLINKING
• "she was selected to join the Tata Archery Academy (TAA) " - the acroynms aren't needed since they are not mentioned anywhere else in the article

Career

• "However, a week before the event, the Indian team withdrew from the event" - remove the text in bold since it's unncessary
• "which was held from 3 to 9 September 2015 at Seoul, South Korea" - from 3 to 9 September in Seoul, South Korea
• "a bronze in the girl's individual recurve event and a silver in the girl's recurve team event." - change the text in bold to competition to avoid close reptition of event
• "She won the bronze medal in the mixed team event with partner Mukesh Boro." - with her partner
• "respectively, on their way to the final." - en route
• "Later in the same year," - Later that year,
• "she was among the 24 members who were selected for the Indian national team to compete" - who were selected to compete for the Indian national team
• "with partner Jemson Singh Ningthoujam, and together they were seeded ninth." - with her partner
• "In April 2018, Bhakat competed at the 2018 Archery World Cup held from 23 to 29 April 2018" - the second mention of 2018 in this section of text is redundant
• "after having scored 665 out of 720 in the qualifications round." - out of 720 points
• Delink Argentina and China as they are major geographical regions
• "quarter-final and the Ukrainian team 6–0 in the semi final," - "semi final" is missing a hyphen
• "reaching the quarter-finals in both the events" - of both events
• "In the latter event, she teamed up with Promila Daimary and Deepika Kumari," - competed for variety
• "and eventually reached the semifinals by defeating" - semi-finals
• "by defeating the French and the Russian team 5–3 and 5–1 in the second round and quarter-final respectively." - teams and quarter-finals, respectively.
• "they faced Chinese Taipei in the bronze medal match, but lost 2–6." - losing 2–6.

References

• References 1, 7, 12, 16, 17, 19, 20, 21 and 22 are missing the dates they were accessed
• Reference 4 should have the language field filled as Hindi
• References 6, 7, 11, 12, 13, 14, 16, 17, 19, 20, 21, 22 should be written normally and not solely in capital letters
• Reference 23 is missing Press Trust of India as the agency who provided the paper with the story

Going to put the review on hold so that the nominator has time to address the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 20:15, 4 March 2019 (UTC)

Hi MWright96, and thank you for taking the time to review this article. I'm sorry for not getting back to you sooner. I think I've addressed all the queries. Could you take a look? MBlaze Lightning 13:48, 11 March 2019 (UTC)

@MBlaze Lightning: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 14:49, 11 March 2019 (UTC)