Talk:Angie Bolen/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 05:46, 28 May 2012 (UTC)

I think this one has waited long enough. Will review it soon. Ruby 2010/2013 05:46, 28 May 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Comments

• It would be easier to just provide the necessary wikilink for ABC rather than adding the parenthesis
• Angie is a "loving but tough Italian woman." -> Angie has been described by Cherry as a "loving but tough Italian woman."
• When Julie rejects him once more, Danny attempts suicide by swallowing a large amount of pills -> When Julie rejects Danny once more, he attempts suicide by swallowing a large amount of pills
• The reception section could be improved by adding [[File:Drea de Matteo 2.jpg]] and splitting the paragraph in two.

A well-written article. I will be happy to pass it after the above comments are addressed. Thanks, Ruby 2010/2013 04:29, 29 May 2012 (UTC)

Looks good. Passing for GA. Keep up the good work. Ruby 2010/2013 01:32, 1 June 2012 (UTC)