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QPQ not needed, new enough, long enough, passes earwig. Hook is cited. Prose somewhat clunky and could use some copy-editing. --evrik(talk)04:23, 8 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Yoninah:, you are a better copy editor, what say you? --evrik(talk)
@Evrik: I did a drop more editing on the article to align with English grammar. I also moved up a paragraph and changed some subheads so it would flow logically. It looks good now. Yoninah (talk) 17:59, 8 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
(ec)@Evrik: However, the hook needs more work. It's a lyric video, not a music video. If that's the angle they want to take, they could write something like:
I disagree. ALT0 is not worded correctly nor according to the source, and your version reads much more smoothly than mine. Striking the ones not to use. Yoninah (talk) 18:44, 8 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Per WP:DYK#Cited hook, "Each fact in the hook must be supported in the article by at least one inline citation to a reliable source, appearing no later than the end of the sentence(s) offering that fact." To satisfy this requirement, I made a duplicate citation immediately after the sentence with the hook fact. The source is in Swedish, but the Google translation seemed pretty clear. MANdARAX•XAЯAbИAM19:38, 9 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]