Talk:Angelina (Bob Dylan song)/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Ippantekina (talk) 04:15, 12 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 12:40, 7 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Infobox: shouldn't the release date be 1991 instead?
- I may be missing something - it's showing March 26, 1991. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 19:44, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"his Gospel Tour which concluded" comma before "which"
- Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 19:44, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Any specific reason why the song was cut from Shot of Love?
- Heylin's Behind the Shades has quite a lot on the changing tracklist, but offers no reasons. I had a look at some other sources. In Time Out of Mind: The Lives of Bob Dylan (2013), Ian Bell wrote that the probable reason for a new tracklist was to keep the album's running time to 40 minutes, commenting: "Why songs such as 'Caribbean Wind' or 'Angelina' had to make way for the likes of the strange, half-hearted 'Lenny Bruce' remains one of the biggest mysteries. The artist has not explained himself." I've added a line into the article. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 19:44, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"Trager also notes that" past tense for consistency
- Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 19:44, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"Author Jim Beviglia thinks that" ditto
- Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 19:44, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Link rhyming pattern
- Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 19:44, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"included the track in 71st place" would be useful for us to know how many songs in total was in the list
- Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 19:44, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Whoops, I misread the release date as 1981. My bad, Ippantekina (talk) 04:14, 12 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Putting this On hold-- Ippantekina (talk) 16:44, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Side note; I'd appreciate very much if you could take a look at my current GAN for The Story of Us (song). Cheers, Ippantekina (talk) 16:45, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks, Ippantekina. I've responded above. Let me know if anything else is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 19:44, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the changes. Passing-- Ippantekina (talk) 04:14, 12 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.