Talk:Angela Lansbury/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 16:47, 18 January 2016 (UTC)

I will review this article. Thank you.  — Ssven2 ^{Speak 2 me} 16:47, 18 January 2016 (UTC)

Comments

• "Her paternal grandfather was the Labour Party leader and anti-war activist George Lansbury, a man she felt "awed" by, considering him "a giant in my youth"" — Can be rephrased as " Her paternal grandfather was the Labour Party leader and anti-war activist George Lansbury, a man whom she felt "awed" by and considered "a giant in my youth".
  • Good suggestion. Changed. Midnightblueowl (talk) 20:30, 23 January 2016 (UTC)

References

• A few dead links and redirects are there. Fix them.
  • I was surprised that there would be any dead links until realising that they were all in the External Links, which I have barely looked at. I've removed the dead links and will also sought out any redirects! Best, Midnightblueowl (talk) 19:54, 25 January 2016 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

@Midnightblueowl: Great job once again, Midnightblueowl.  — Ssven2 ^{Speak 2 me} 08:25, 31 January 2016 (UTC)