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Reviewer: Pedro thy master (talk · contribs) 17:25, 12 October 2012 (UTC)
- Lede: "that she can Andy's educated family". Seems like the word impress is missing from here.
- Whoops! Fixed.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 22:19, 13 October 2012 (UTC)
- Plot: "Nellie later asks Pam to paint a mural in the warehouse". Seems trivial.
- It might seem trivial, but I think it will have a big impact on the season, to be honest.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 22:19, 13 October 2012 (UTC)
- Plot: Since most of the cast is already linked in parenthesis in the lede, it seem unnecessary to do the same in the plot section.
- I've only done this for consistency, since that's the way the rest of The Office articles are.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 22:19, 13 October 2012 (UTC)
- Cultural references: Add were the language of Kilingon comes from.
- CR: Add to Lizzie Borden a very short summary of who she was like you did with Nixon.
- CR: "Andy refers to Ladysmith Black Mambazo as "Ladysmith African-American Mambazo" in an attempt to prove he is not racist". That is not referenced.
- It's the one after the next sentence, Paste. I tend to bundle citations.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 22:19, 13 October 2012 (UTC)
- References: In your review of Baby Not On Board you mentioned something about double quotation marks. I believe some of your references have this problem, although I might be wrong, would you mind explaining that issue.
- Whoops! Yeah, the last two had issues. Fixed now.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 22:19, 13 October 2012 (UTC)
That's about it. Fix or explain the issues. I'll give it a week. Pedro J. the rookie 17:25, 12 October 2012 (UTC)
- I believe I've addressed everything. Thanks for the review!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 22:19, 13 October 2012 (UTC)
- Congrats. Pass. Pedro J. the rookie 22:43, 13 October 2012 (UTC)