Talk:Andorra in the Eurovision Song Contest/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 11:39, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will review this today --K. Peake 11:39, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Shouldn't you use semi-final instead of sf in the infobox to be specific?
"and participating every year" → "and participating every year thereafter"
"with RTVA citing" → "with the national broadcaster Ràdio i Televisió d'Andorra (RTVA) citing" with the wikilink
"and as of 2021 the country has yet to" → "and the country has since yet to" per the body not directly mentioning this being in 2021
"and recent statements from" → "while recent statements from"
"Ràdio i Televisió d'Andorra (RTVA), the national broadcaster of Andorra, has used" → "RTVA has used"
Pipe the years to the appropriate Eurovision wikis
"small population on occasion" → "small population, on occasion"

Contest history

"to raise the profile of the country" → "to raise their profile"
"and with an assurance that" → "and an assurance that"
"in the contest for" → "in the Eurovision Song Contest for"
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The viewers and an assembled jury being those who selected the entry is not sourced
Pipe grand final to Eurovision Song Contest 2004#Final
Pipe final to Eurovision Song Contest 2005#Final
Are you sure the source actually confirms the nation coming last in the contest?
"to the final." → "to the final in either of the contests."
"on their sixth appearance Andorra" → "on their sixth appearance, Andorra"
Img looks good!
Are you sure the part about how leaving would prevent further participation is sourced?
"In recent years renewed" → "In recent years, renewed"
"and past Andorran Eurovision artists have" → "with past Andorran Eurovision artists having"
"the nation's last participant," → "Andorra's last participant,"
"to enable Andorra to" → "for enabling Andorra to"

Selection process

"in the national final." → "in the Eurovision Song Contest 2004."
[38] does not mention the 2006 to 2008 selections

Voting

"where Andorra participated in the contest" → "where Andorra participated,"
"However each country was" → "However, each country was"
Wikilink SMS
The parts about the nation having a small population and back-up jury results being used on occasion are not sourced
"when the votes of the country's" → "when the votes of Andorra's"
"in the semi-final and final." → "in both the semi-final and final."

Contestants

Good

Related involvement

Heads of delegation

Year → Year(s)

Commentators and spokespersons

Img looks good!
Remove wikilink on Andorra Televisió
"have provided comment on" → "have provided commentary for"
Table looks good!

Gallery

Neat additions and they all look good!

References

Copyvio score looks amazing at 9.9%!!!
WP:OVERLINK of European Broadcasting Union on ref 2 and should CH really be capitalised?
Wikilink Wiwibloggs on ref 29
Wikilink Eurovision Song Contest on ref 32
Cite Racó Català as publisher instead for ref 34
Remove (EBU) from ref 48 for consistency
rtvasa.ad → Andorra Difusió on ref 51, citing as publisher instead
esctoday.com → ESCToday on ref 53, citing as publisher instead

Final comments and verdict

On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 21:47, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the quick review again! I believe I have covered all the points above. I have added a few more refs to cover some of the gaps you mentioned, please do shout if you have any further questions or queries on the new info. Sims2aholic8 (talk) 22:44, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Sims2aholic8 ✓ Pass now, looks good! --K. Peake 08:30, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]