Talk:Amor Prohibido/GA3

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 19:29, 20 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there! I'm Cartoon network freak and my review for your GAN is going to arrive soon Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:29, 20 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

relationships, its lyrics → relationships; its lyrics

Done

peaked atop the Billboard Hot Latin Songs chart → How can an album peak on a singles chart

Fixed

US number one singles → number one singles in America

It was number one in the US not Canada, South and Central America.

The titular single "Amor Prohibido" → romove "the titular single", as you've mention this thing above already

Done

US Latin → Latin American

I believe you're talking about the Hot Latin Songs Year-End link, the term Latin American consist of countries including South and Central America. The chart is only monitored in the US.

record it → record which it

Done

the US → that territory

Which occasion?

acclaim, it is → acclaim, with it being

Done

for the Best Mexican → remove "the"

Done

Grammy Awards, it won → make two sentences here

Done

boutiques, her death increased sales → boutiques, which resulted increased sales

Done

Amor Prohibido reentered the → The record as well reentered the

Done

and was certified gold by → and gaining a Gold certification accorded by

The RIAA is an authoritative source (official organization), so if a record is gold it's not according to them it is gold by their standards.

(RIAA); a signification of 500,000 shipped units → (RIAA)—a signification of 500,000 shipped units

Done

It was certified platinum within three weeks, and in February 2010 the RIAA re-certified the album double diamond for shipments of two million copies in the US. → Within the next three weeks, it went on being certified Platinum, with it finally being re-certified by the RIAA double Diamond in February 2011 for exceeding shipments of two million copies.

Done

It is tied → The album is tied

Done

all-time → all time

Done

by Billboard → by the Billboard

"The" is redundant

magazine and nominated it among its list of the top 100 albums of all-time → magazine, with them listing it under their list of the top 100 best albums ever recorded.

If I use that, I'll be explicitly implying Billboard twice them and their, I can just say nominated it among its list.

Thanks for your review! I have fixed some of your concerns. – jona ✉ 12:11, 24 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@AJona1992: Full GANR going to arrive by tomorrow or Sunday. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 06:19, 26 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Production and development

work had begun on Amor Prohibido → sounds weird; try to say that Selena begun working on the album with her team
after; taking → after—´taking
Quintanilla, found → remove comma
career launching → career-laughing
said in a → expressed in a
that was experimental → that adopted the experimental genre
as we parted → as he parted
pre-arrange and sequenced → pre-arrange, with them sequencing
to actually record → remove "actually"

Recording

Composition

Release and promotion

Commercial performance

Critical reception

Track listing

Make sure you add here "Credits adapted from the liner notes of Amor Prohibido." accompanyied by the AV notes.
2002 re-release → 2002 re-release bonus tracks

Credits and personnel

Credits are taken from the album's liner notes. → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Amor Prohibido.
Performance credits → Vocal credits
Technical and production → Technical and production credits

Charts

flawless

Certifications

Don't let the space blanked for Mexico, add a {{N/A|None}} there (Unlocked)

References

flawless

Bibliography

flawless

External links

flawless

Outcome

@AJona1992: Although I have not reviewed the sections remained, I have took a look at them and realized that they're in fact mostly flawless; I mean if you want the article to be FL you can ask me to review them, but there are nothing more than some minor adding-comma issues like in the other sections. While solving my comments above, I put this on hold for seven days. Please ping me when your're ready. Best and good luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:28, 26 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Cartoon network freak: I have fixed all issues, I didn't add the "n/a" part since it is not a field over at Template:Certification Table Top, so instead I renamed it to "certifications and sales". Thanks – jona ✉ 20:04, 26 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Passing Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:22, 26 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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