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GA Reassessment

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As part of the WikiProject Good Articles, we're doing sweeps to go over all of the current GAs and see if they still meet the GA criteria. I'm specifically going over all of the "Culture and Society" articles. I believe the article currently meets the majority of the criteria and should remain listed as a Good article. However, in reviewing the article, I have found there are some issues that need to be addressed. I have made minor corrections and have included several points below that need to be addressed for the article to remain a GA. Please address them within seven days and the article will maintain its GA status. If progress is being made and issues are addressed, the article will remain listed as a Good article. Otherwise, it may be delisted. If improved after it has been delisted, it may be nominated at WP:GAN. If you disagree with any of the issues, leave a comment after the specific issue and I'll be happy to discuss/agree with you. To keep tabs on your progress so far, either strike through the completed tasks or put checks next to them.

Needs inline citations:

  1. "Ohio has the largest population (55,000), followed by Pennsylvania (39,000) and Indiana (37,000)."
  2. "Some Beachy Amish have relocated to Central America, including a large community near San Ignacio, Belize."
  3. "The former Western Ontario Mennonite Conference (WOMC) was made up almost entirely of former Amish who reunited with the Mennonite Church in Canada."
  4. "Amman insisted upon this practice, even to the point of expecting a spouse to refuse to eat with the banned member until he/she repented of his/her behaviour."
    • No source was found that says this directly, but it is a reasonable conclusion and is echoed in current practice. A source providing the background of Anabaptist shunning, including this very argument of spouse shunning, and Ammann's support of the strictest forms is provided.[4] ✤ JonHarder talk 15:11, 4 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  5. "Because the Amish are the result of a division with the Mennonites, some consider the Amish a conservative Mennonite group."
  6. "No Old Order movement ever developed in Europe; these communities are all in the Americas."
    • This statement was dropped. The decline of the Amish in Europe and origination of "Old Order" adequately covered in remainder of the section. Some clarification and a source added.[6] ✤ JonHarder talk 13:44, 4 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  7. "It is also the proximate cause for rejecting education beyond the eighth grade, especially speculative study that has little practical use for farm life but may awaken personal and materialistic ambitions."
  8. "The Amish often cite three Bible verses that encapsulate their cultural attitudes:"
  9. "Some of the strictest Old Order Amish groups are the Nebraska Amish ("White-top" Amish), Troyer Amish, the Swartzendruber Amish."
  10. "Shunning is also sometimes imposed by bishops on church members guilty of offenses such as using forbidden technology. Church members may also be called to confess before the congregation."
  11. "Those who come to be baptized sit with one hand over their face, to represent their submission and humility to the church."
  12. "Weddings are typically held on Tuesdays and Thursdays in November to early December, after the harvest is in."
  13. "The deceased are dressed by family members of the same sex: men and unmarried women in white clothing, and married women in their wedding outfits."
  14. "A church district is measured by the number of families (households), rather than by the number of baptized persons. "
  15. "Once a couple has married, it is understood that the most important family function is childbearing."
  16. "In some communities, the church leaders meet annually to review such proposals. In others, it is done whenever necessary."
  17. "Many Amish communities also accept the use of chemical pesticides and GM crops, forgoing more common Amish organic farming techniques."
  18. "In the 1970s, for example, a farmer near Milan Center, Indiana, was ordered by his bishop to buy a conventional tractor. He had severe progressive arthritis, and with no sons to harness the horses for him, the tractor was seen as a need, rather than a vanity. The rest of the community continued farming with horses."
  19. "Hiring a taxi is forbidden on Sundays, as is any transfer of money."
  20. "It is not descended from the Dutch language, but is closest to the German dialect Schwäbisch or Swabian," This has been tagged since September 2007.
  21. "The restriction on buttons is attributed in part to their association with military uniforms, and also to their potential for serving as opportunities for vain display."
  22. "When a girl becomes available to be courted, she wears a black bonnet" This has been tagged since November 2007.
  23. "These unmarried women also wear a white cape." This has been tagged since November 2007.
  24. "Single Amish men are clean-shaven; if they are available to court women, they will put a dent in their hat."
    • I addressed this by dropping the sentence.[24] The first part is adequately covered in the remainder of the paragraph. The second part about a dent in the hat may be from a single community or original research that will prove difficult to verify. ✤ JonHarder talk 03:11, 2 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  25. "Moustaches are not allowed, because they are associated with the military, and because they give opportunity for vanity."
  26. "Some Amish are afflicted by heritable genetic disorders, including dwarfism (Ellis-van Creveld syndrome), have the highest incidence of twins in a human population, various metabolic disorders, and unusual distribution of blood-types."
  27. "Ministers, certain church employees, and Christian Science practitioners may qualify for exemption under a similar clause."
    • The paragraph has been clarified and provided with additional references.[28] The above statement was dropped as off-topic for the article; the new IRS pub reference does cover it, should the reader choose to follow the link. ✤ JonHarder talk 13:53, 2 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  28. "Despite the vast differences between the two groups, the French and Romanian version of the film Witness mistranslated "Amish" as "Mormon.""

Other issues:

  1. To better summarize the article, the lead needs to be expanded to three or four paragraphs. See WP:LEAD for guidelines.
  2. "In 2000, there were approximately 198,000 Old Order Amish in the United States, according to calculations based on the number of church districts and average district size in Raber's Almanac." Can this statistic be updated with any more recent data?
  3. "Most Old Order and conservative Amish groups do not proselytize, and conversion to the Amish faith is rare but not unheard of. The Beachy Amish, on the other hand, do pursue missionary work." I think that this should be moved to another section as it seems out of place here.
  4. "Suicide rates for the Amish of Lancaster County were 5.5 per 100,000 in 1980, about half that of the general population." Is there any more current data for this statement? Also, are there statistics for other Amish communities?
  5. Throughout the article there are several sentences that stand by themselves. They should either be expanded on or incporated into another paragraph.
    • These have all been addressed through the process of fixing the other problems, except for the Amish#Music section. I suggest it can be removed as trivia without a reliable, third-party source. I'll wait to see what other editors think. ✤ JonHarder talk 19:46, 5 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

This article covers the topic well and if the above issues are addressed, I believe the article can remain a GA. I will leave the article on hold for seven days, but if progress is being made and an extension is needed, one may be given. I will leave messages on the talk pages of the main contributors to the article along with the related WikiProjects so that the workload can be shared. If you have any questions, let me know on my talk page and I'll get back to you as soon as I can. Happy editing! --Nehrams2020 (talk) 08:01, 30 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

GA Sweeps Review: Pass

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I believe the article currently meets the criteria and should remain listed as a Good article. Good job on addressing the issues (the diffs were really helpful by the way!). Continue to improve the article making sure all new information is properly sourced and neutral. It would also be beneficial to go through the article and update all of the access dates of the online inline citations and fix any dead links. If you have any questions, let me know on my talk page and I'll get back to you as soon as I can. I have updated the article history to reflect this review. Happy editing! --Nehrams2020 (talk) 04:33, 7 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Three Wikicheers for JonHarder

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Who really busted tail on this article, and whupped it into shape! DavidOaks (talk) 15:18, 7 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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