Talk:Amir Blumenfeld/GA1

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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) 06:10, 3 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

~~Do we know what type of degree he got.~~--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 17:01, 3 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- He says in the cited article "I studied business", and I thought the fact that he went to a business school would make this obvious. I added the name of the program he studied under to clarify that it was undergraduate, and linked it to the relevant section at the Haas School of Business article. I don't think he's gone into more detail about his degree, but that section provides more information. ajmint (talk•edits) 23:06, 4 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  - Lot's of business schools give Bachelor of Business Administration (I went to Michigan Business School — now Ross School— and this is what they give). Others like Wharton give Bachelor of Science, which is what I believe Berkeley gives.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 02:14, 5 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    - I have added Bachelor of Science to the article. ajmint (talk•edits) 17:22, 6 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Why is File:Jake and Amir in character.png necessary. It has no FUR and with three other images of the subject of this article, I don't see what it adds. I don't see an element of WP:NFCC that justifies its use.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 17:34, 3 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Removed. ajmint (talk•edits) 23:06, 4 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

This is a very good article. I am putting this on hold to await responses to my concerns above.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 17:35, 3 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]